Baseball Diamond (Wikipedia)
Babe was born in 1983 to a legendary family of baseball players. His father was a slugger, like his father before him. After their fathers retired, each son in the family would take up the reigns and carry on the family legacy. Babe was no different. His father raised him from when he was a toddler to become the greatest baseball player who ever lived. When Babe started going to elementary school, he began to play baseball with the neighborhood kids, some of them twice his age. Because of his training, Babe would excel in these games and his popularity quickly rose. The older kids started calling him The Sultan of Swat. By the time Babe was in the 4th grade, the entire neighborhood, including the adults, would come to spectate at these impromptu baseball games. One day, while Babe was showing off his skill at the plate, another boy walked from the crowd onto the field.
Barry's life started in 1983 as well. He was found abandoned in front of a foster home, which took him in. He lived a hard life where he owned nothing and the few things he had in his possession were shared with all the other kids, though he had one thing he would absolutely not give up. His most prized possession was a baseball left with him when he was abandoned. The second he was told about baseball, he started playing it with the kids on the lawn of the home. When he turned 8, he was finally adopted by a couple. His new father was a taxi driver and his mother was a teacher. Barry kept his love for baseball and began to play it with the kids at his school. Through his dedication, he refined his skills to the point of perfection. Barry's family moved when he started the 4th grade after his mother found a better job in another school district.
Barry stepped out onto the field and stared at the crowd. He yelled at Babe to give up the plate to him, telling him that he could do everything he can and better. Though the other kids on the lot jeered at Barry, Babe was curious. He thought to himself that no kid as disheveled and dirty as this one could beat him, so he'd let Barry humiliate himself in front of the audience. Babe tossed the bat to Barry, who stepped up to the plate and assumed a batting position. The pitcher threw a mean knuckle ball but Barry read the movements perfectly. The bat cracked like lightning when he struck the ball as it flew into the air over the houses fences behind them. The jeers returned with the kids calling it a fluke, but Barry did it again and again until they were satisfied. He then offered a challenge to Babe. If he could win against Babe in a game of baseball, Babe would have to give up his title. Babe accepted but the sun started setting, putting their match on hold until the next time they met.
Author's Note: So this is based off a story from the Mahabharata. Arjuna has a half-brother named Karna who was abandoned at birth, put into a basket and sent down a river. Arjuna grew up as a prince and was taught by masters how to conduct himself in combat. Karna was adopted by a charioteer and wanted to learn more about archery, so he asked a master called Drona to teach him. He was rejected, so he ended up asking Drona's guru to teach him instead. Arjuna is performing these miraculous acts in front of an audience through the use of astras when Karna comes in and tells everyone he can do everything Arjuna did. So Karna demonstrates this and proposes a fight with Arjuna, but the day ends before they can fight. In my story, Babe represents Arjuna, being from a noble heritage and taught by a master. Barry represents Karna, being abandoned at birth and taken in by a taxi driver (charioteer). I liked the idea of Karna growing as an archer to be equal to Arjuna through sheer hard work, even though it's more likely it was just a natural gift seeing as they're both offsprings of the gods. Nevertheless, I showed Barry refining his skills through sheer hard work and getting to be equals with Babe.
Bibliography: The Mahabharata by R. K. Narayan
Tyler, I do not know very much about baseball so at first, I thought this was a true story about Babe Ruth. Once I got to your author's notes and read that it was actually based off of The Mahabharata I was very impressed. The way you correlated Barry's life to Karna's life with the simple detail of having the father be a taxi driver. I think the small details are the best in the different recreation stories we create in this class. Great job, I'll try and come back later on to read more of your stories.
ReplyDeleteTyler I really enjoyed this story because I played baseball all of my life until college (now I just get to play intramural softball but it isn't the same). I like how you made a story about Babe Ruth as well because as a child I did a project on him that I had to make a poster board for and I'm pretty sure my mom kept it! Haha. I can't wait to read more of your stories.
ReplyDeleteHey, Tyler! I am immediately interested in your story! Relating it to baseball is something that will automatically engage readers. I definitely feel like this language and plot is something that many people can relate to. Thanks so much for sharing and I can not wait to read more of our stories throughout the semester! Best of luck and happy until. Jessie
ReplyDeleteHey again Tyler! Your story is very interesting. Spinning the story of Babe Ruth in with Indian culture is really unique. The concept of hard work being the equal of privilege is a great lesson to take from the Mahbharata, and I think you nailed it with this story. I will be looking for more of your stories to read. Great work!
ReplyDeleteHey there again, Tyler!
ReplyDeleteI thought that you had a really great title and cover image for the story. That is what initially drew me in to read it. I absolutely love the sport of baseball (go Red Sox), and I wanted to check out what you wrote. The story was a very cool read. I think you are on the right track here.